The other thing that I struggle with is writing the log line of the movie a small one or two sentences telling the reader what the movie is about . With Sins of Man : Rise of Mortis it came to me relatively quickly :) The basic rule of thumb is don't use names because the names of the characters don't hold any weight with the potential viewer until AFTER they see the movie .
Sins of Man : Rise of Mortis Log Line : A young girl struggling with the events of her past is rocked when a serial killer strikes her small Maine town. It sends her into a tailspin that she may never recover from ... If she survives !
it took me a few hours to write this log line and I loved it as soon as I wrote it because it gives you the basis idea of the story .
Now with Sins of Man II : Vengeance I'm finding it difficult to write the blurb and log line because it's a sequel so am I allowed to write character's names in the log line / blurb ? It would make it 100% easier and I could knock it out quick like a Rhonda Rousey fight LOL .
I will be working on this log line and blub for awhile I think then I will continue with my mini vacation before starting to work on the final outline and final draft of the Sins of Man III : Tribulation script .
STAY HUMBLE, STAY HUNGRY MY FRIENDS :)